"A Wall of Fire Rising"

I never expected the ending. Sure I saw the hints of the father's sadness, but I never suspected such a grand conclusion. The author's pacing was brilliant, slowly at first but rising quickly into a crescendo of color and senses. I loved the character of Guy and the way he tried to deal with his family in the best way that he could, until it eventually became too much. The story started slowly, but finished on a definite high note, great work.