"Tapka"

Firstly I'd like to state that as I have a Lhasa Apso; this story was depressing. On the technical side of things, it was very well written. I particularly enjoyed the dialogue. It had that short, snappy sentence structure that I really enjoy. I loved the change in Rita's character, and the venomous way she said liar at the end. Pacing, I will admit I thought was a little off. The beginning of the story before Tapka was introduced dragged a bit. I found myself caring very little for any of the characters outside of Tapka and Rita.